Information Text: All About Animals
Concepts
This study delivers 1 primary concept and 3 secondary concepts.
Primary concept: Writing for different purposes (EN-KS1-C047)
Type: Skill | Teaching weight: 3/6Adapting writing for different text types (narrative, recount, poetry)
Teaching guidance: Introduce different text types through reading before asking children to write them. Cover key purposes: narrative (stories), recount (retelling events), instruction (how to do something), information (facts about a topic), letters, and poetry. Discuss the features of each text type explicitly: 'Instructions use numbered steps and bossy verbs.' Provide model texts and writing frames to scaffold early attempts. Ensure children understand that the purpose of writing determines its form and language choices. Key vocabulary: purpose, story, recount, instructions, information, letter, poem, audience, text type, for Common misconceptions: Children may default to narrative structure for all writing, including instructions and information texts. They may not understand that different purposes require different language features (e.g., imperative verbs in instructions, past tense in recounts). Some children focus on content without considering who they are writing for.Differentiation
| Level | What success looks like | Example task | Common errors |
| Entry | Writing for a single familiar purpose (e.g., a story or a label) with adult support. | Write a sentence to go with this picture of a farm. You are writing a label to tell people about it. | Writing without awareness of the purpose (e.g., writing a story when a label was requested); Not distinguishing between different types of writing |
| Developing | Writing for two or three different purposes (narrative, recount, list) with some awareness that each requires different features. | Write instructions for making a sandwich. Remember to use bossy verbs and number the steps. | Writing in narrative form ('First I got the bread and then I put butter on it') instead of instruction form; Including imperative verbs but forgetting to number or sequence the steps |
| Expected | Writing for a range of purposes — narrative, recount, instruction, information, letter, poetry — using features appropriate to each text type. | Write a letter to a friend telling them about a trip you went on. Use the correct letter layout. | Writing a recount without the letter format (no greeting or sign-off); Mixing up the features of different text types |
| Greater Depth | Adapting writing style and language for different purposes and audiences, explaining why different text types need different features. | Write about the school trip twice: once as a recount for your diary and once as a report for the school newsletter. How are they different? | Writing both pieces in the same style; Explaining that they are different but not articulating how or why |
Model response (Entry): 'This is a farm with cows and sheep.'
Model response (Developing): '1. Get two slices of bread. 2. Spread butter on both slices. 3. Add cheese. 4. Put the slices together.'
Model response (Expected): Child writes with a greeting, recounts the trip in past tense with personal detail, and ends with a sign-off.
Model response (Greater Depth): Diary: 'Today was the best day ever! We went to the museum and I saw a real dinosaur skeleton.' Newsletter: 'Year 2 visited the Natural History Museum on Tuesday. The children particularly enjoyed the dinosaur exhibition.' 'The diary is personal and uses I/we. The newsletter is formal and written for parents.'
Secondary concept: Retrieval (EN-KS1-C016)
Type: Skill | Teaching weight: 2/6Finding and extracting explicit information from text
Differentiation
| Level | What success looks like | Common errors |
| Entry | Finding explicitly stated information in a sentence when the question uses the same wording as the text. | Answering from general knowledge ('Dogs are usually brown') instead of from the text; Not looking at the text to find the answer |
| Developing | Finding information when the question is worded differently from the text, scanning to locate the relevant part. | Answering from memory or general knowledge without checking the text; Finding a sentence about penguins but extracting the wrong detail |
| Expected | Retrieving specific information from across a text, locating and pointing to evidence, including answering questions that require finding more than one piece of information. | Finding one piece of information but not both; Giving information about the wrong creature from the same text |
| Greater Depth | Retrieving and combining information from different parts of a text to give a complete answer, distinguishing relevant from irrelevant details. | Using information from only one paragraph when the answer spans two; Including irrelevant details about other animals from the same text |
Secondary concept: Expanded noun phrases (EN-KS1-C060)
Type: Skill | Teaching weight: 3/6Adding adjectives to nouns for description (e.g., the blue butterfly)
Differentiation
| Level | What success looks like | Common errors |
| Entry | Adding a single adjective before a noun to describe it. | Adding a verb instead of an adjective ('The running dog'); Choosing a vague adjective ('The nice dog') |
| Developing | Using two adjectives before a noun, separated by a comma, to create an expanded noun phrase. | Using two similar adjectives ('the big, large castle'); Forgetting the comma between adjectives |
| Expected | Using expanded noun phrases in own writing to add detail and interest, choosing adjectives for precision. | Using generic adjectives ('nice', 'good', 'big') rather than precise ones; Expanding every noun phrase, making the writing feel overloaded |
| Greater Depth | Choosing expanded noun phrases deliberately to create a specific mood or impression, explaining the effect of adjective choices. | Using the same adjectives for both moods; Creating different moods but not being able to explain which adjectives contribute to the effect |
Secondary concept: Commas in lists (EN-KS1-C065)
Type: Skill | Teaching weight: 3/6Using commas to separate items in a list
Differentiation
| Level | What success looks like | Common errors |
| Entry | Understanding that commas separate items when listing more than two things. | Not noticing the commas at all; Thinking commas are the same as full stops |
| Developing | Using commas to separate items in a list of three or more, with 'and' before the final item. | Using 'and' between every item instead of commas; Placing commas after every item including before 'and' |
| Expected | Using commas in lists consistently and correctly in independent writing, including lists of adjectives, nouns and verbs. | Using commas in noun lists but forgetting them in adjective or verb lists; Placing commas randomly rather than between each item |
| Greater Depth | Understanding that commas in lists prevent ambiguity and can change meaning. | Not seeing the ambiguity in the uncomma'd version; Understanding the joke but not connecting it to the function of commas |
Thinking lens: Evidence and Argument (primary)
Key question: What is the evidence, how reliable is it, and what conclusions can it support? Why this lens fits: Self-correction is driven by the reader checking their decoding or interpretation against the evidence of surrounding context — 'does this word make sense here?' is an implicit argument from evidence. Question stems for KS1:Session structure: Text Study
Text Study
A reading-to-writing cycle for primary and KS3 English. Begins with shared or guided reading of a high-quality text, moves through analysis of language features and authorial choices, builds vocabulary, then scaffolds the writing process from planning through drafting to editing and publication.
shared_reading → analysis → vocabulary → planning → drafting → editing
Assessment: Final written outcome in the genre studied, demonstrating understanding of text features, appropriate vocabulary use, and effective application of the writing process.
Teacher note: Use the TEXT STUDY template: read a short, engaging text together, using pictures and expression to bring it alive. Help children point out interesting words and talk about what they mean. Guide them to say what happened in the story or what the text told them. Encourage them to have a go at their own simple piece of writing inspired by the text.
KS1 question stems:
Text type and features
Text type: Non Fiction Features to teach: title and subheadings, topic sentences, present tense for facts, labelled diagrams, simple glossary Writing outcome: Write a simple non-chronological report (6-10 sentences) about an animal with a title, subheadings, factual sentences in present tense, and a labelled diagram Grammar focus: present tense for facts, expanded noun phrases, commas in lists, subordination (because, when) (from Y2 Appendix 2)Suggested texts
Genre
Why this study matters
Non-chronological reports about animals are the standard entry point to information writing at KS1 because children are naturally interested in animals and already have background knowledge. The cross-curricular link to Science (living things, habitats) provides authentic content. The structured layout (title, subheadings, facts) teaches organisational skills transferable to all non-fiction writing.
Pitfalls to avoid
Cross-curricular opportunities
| Link | Subject | Connection | Strength |
| Using Technology: Creating Digital Content | Computing | Using digital tools for simple research | Moderate |
| World Continents and Oceans | Geography | Where animals live in the world | Moderate |
Reading and writing skills (KS1)
These disciplinary skills should be woven through teaching, not taught in isolation:
Vocabulary word mat
| Term | Meaning |
| add |
| adjective |
| and |
| answer |
| audience |
| between |
| comma |
| describe |
| detail |
| expand |
| find |
| for |
| in a list |
| information |
| instructions |
| items |
| letter |
| list |
| look for |
| more detail |
| noun |
| noun phrase |
| pause |
| poem |
| point to |
| purpose |
| recount |
| separate |
| show me |
| story |
| text |
| text type |
| the big red ball |
| three or more |
| where does it say |
| report |
| non-chronological |
| subheading |
| fact |
| diagram |
| label |
| caption |
| glossary |
Prior knowledge (retrieval plan)
Pupils should already know the following from earlier units:
| Prior knowledge needed | For concept | Description |
| Sentence composition | Writing for different purposes | Creating complete, meaningful sentences |
| Word classes: nouns | Expanded noun phrases | Understanding that nouns are naming words for people, places, things |
| Word classes: adjectives | Expanded noun phrases | Understanding that adjectives describe nouns |
Scaffolding and inclusion (Y2)
| Guideline | Detail |
| Reading level | Emergent Reader |
| Text-to-speech | Required |
| Max sentence length | 10 words |
| Vocabulary | Common concrete nouns plus simple abstractions (e.g., feelings, seasons, simple cause/effect). High-frequency words accessible. Subject vocabulary must be spoken and displayed simultaneously. |
| Scaffolding level | Maximum |
| Hint tiers | 2 tiers |
| Session length | 8–15 minutes |
| Worked examples | Required — Narrated with text displayed. Character models the thinking. Pause points for child to predict next step. |
| Feedback tone | Warm Encouraging |
| Normalize struggle | Yes |
| Example correct feedback | You heard the /ee/ sound hiding in the middle — that is tricky to spot! |
| Example error feedback | That is the short /u/ sound. The one we are looking for is /ee/, like in tree. Can you hear the difference? |
Access and Inclusion
Likely barriers
Moderate demands on: Decoding Demand (Retrieval requires the child to locate and extract explicit information from text, which presupposes they can read the text. If decoding is effortful, the child spends cognitive resources on reading rather than on the retrieval skill.).
Universal supports
Apply by default for all learners:
Targeted options
Use with caution
Knowledge organiser
Key terms:Graph context
Node type:EnglishUnit | Study ID: EU-EN-KS1-007
Concept IDs:
EN-KS1-C047: Writing for different purposes (primary)EN-KS1-C016: RetrievalEN-KS1-C060: Expanded noun phrasesEN-KS1-C065: Commas in lists``cypher
MATCH (ts:EnglishUnit {unit_id: 'EU-EN-KS1-007'})
-[:DELIVERS_VIA]->(c:Concept)
-[:HAS_DIFFICULTY_LEVEL]->(dl)
RETURN c.name, dl.label, dl.description
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